1. My project needed more ambient sound. If I had known in advance that I would be creating a piece on this topic, I would have recorded the sounds of football game cheering or the announcing of Ralph Friedgen at a football game. Because there were no more football games this semester, this was impossible, but something of that nature would have strengthened my piece.
2. If I could have eliminated the wind noise from my piece, it would be much better.
3. Although this was a man on the street piece, a comment from an official in athletics could have improved my piece's credibility.
This is the class blog for Journalism 328G/28G, "Special Topics in News Writing and Reporting," where we offer a crash course in audio, photo, and video.
1. My project needed more ambient sound. If I had known in advance that I would be creating a piece on this topic, I would have recorded the sounds of football game cheering or the announcing of Ralph Friedgen at a football game. Because there were no more football games this semester, this was impossible, but something of that nature would have strengthened my piece.
ReplyDelete2. If I could have eliminated the wind noise from my piece, it would be much better.
3. Although this was a man on the street piece, a comment from an official in athletics could have improved my piece's credibility.